A Sonnet of Sorts...

by ~thelittlewolf, Jul 28, 2009, 9:02:18 AM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Post-Teen (Mature) / Traditional Fixed Forms

i burn,
i pine,
i perish.
For the vision
of loveliness itself,
a Goddess walking.
As the leaf desperately yearning
after its' lonely fall,
to return to the tree in the spring.
i yearn to return to her arms,
and to her lips,
and to the gentle warmth of her eyes.

7-21-09 20:56

A Sonnet of Sorts...by ~thelittlewolf

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Post-Teen (Mature) / Traditional Fixed Forms

Just missing her when we're apart...
Any thoughts or comments would be appreciated.

~wolvensong Aug 9, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I always enjoy your great depth and emotion in your poetry. This one in particular is very sweet, I hope she eralizes how much you care ^^

~thelittlewolf Aug 10, 2009 Hobbyist General Artist

i always appreciate getting a thought or two back from someone who actually enjoys my writing. Otherwise, i would probably give it up. Thank ye kindly...

~wolvensong Aug 13, 2009 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

No problem! I love reading your work, it has a depth and honesty I hardly run into on DA. Don't give up!

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